Nitpicks about RPG PDFs

My group and I play a lot of RPGs. While some groups prefer to stick to traditional printed books and paper character sheets, we are pretty comfortable all sitting on our laptops, have our Google Drive character sheets open and a PDF of the rulebook handy. Unfortunately, we have seen our share of bad PDF rulebooks out there, which can make the process of running a game all the more frustrating. Below are some of our gripes and nitpicks around various PDFs we had to deal with over the years.

A number of the examples below may come off a bit harsh especially against small, self-published RPGs. This article is not meant to be an attack against anyone, or a criticism of the RPGs themselves, but it merely uses various RPG PDFs as an example of various mistakes you can make. Most of the RPGs used as examples are things we really enjoy playing - hence why we notice those problems in the first place - by being exposed to them through regular play. With that out of the way...

Good Index is important

First thing that is a must for a PDF or physical books is the Index. When you need to search a 300 something book to find a section explaining a specific topic, you naturally check the Index. Well, it seems that some people may have forgotten that. For example - Mage the Awakening 2nd Edition, a book with almost 100 pages of spells, released their PDF without an Index. Good luck finding Sympathetic Names out of the blue if you don't remember them being described under Space Arcanum.

Luckily, the second version of the PDF did come with an Index. It wasn't Bookmarked, but at least it was there. And it was a pretty exhaustive Index too, listing all the important pages something is discussed and highlighting the primary definition of something:

Now, if you want to earn your final brownie points for a good Index, look at what Broken Worlds did and hyperlink every page number, so that you can click on it and be taken straight into that page. Really solid work!

Speaking of Broken Worlds...

Hyperlink your PDF

This one might take some extra effort, but it is REALLY nice to have - hyperlinks everywhere. Whenever you refer to a specific concept, rule, power, spell or anything that has rules attached to it, make it a hyperlink. It really helps with navigating the PDF. At least do it for key concepts.

Broken Worlds does this pretty well. Take this part of the page from Character Creation section:

It links you to the Train Move, as well as rules for damage, armour, wounds and stamina. The PDF is pretty good when it comes to linking the core rules you might be interested in while reading certain sections and it really works.

Make your PDF copy friendly

Obviously, when you have a PDF, you will want to be able to copy parts of it for your own reference. I personally like making my own character sheets that have a copy of all the relevant powers my character has access to. There are a few things that make the process harder unfortunately.

Have a look at this Elven power from Fellowship playbook PDF

Looks pretty simple, has some bolds, italics and so on, but should be a simple thing to copy, right? Well, this is how it looks when you actually try to copy it:

enchanting performance (grace)
When you perform an Elven art for an attentive
audienceL roll (GraceE On a 10KL you may Forge a Bond with
as many audience members as you6d likeE The Bond should
relate to how much they adore and appreciate youE On a 7U9L
you may only Forge a Bond with a single listenerE On a 6UL no
one caresE

For some reason, every non-alphanumerical character is a special character or something. This means you have to manually correct anything you copy as some sort of copy protection mechanism or something. Luckily, this sort of thing is quite rare (although I have a bad luck with headers / power names...).

Other than that, you have a small issue of the power name being all lowercase, and then using hard breaks on every line rather than making the PDF format itself. The latter means if you want to make something into an actual paragraph, you have to delete every newline and add a space instead. Can get a bit tedious on bigger chunks of text.

But that's generally something you have to deal with infrequently, now let's talk about probably our favourite pet peeve - Bookmarks!

Bookmarks are important!

Having a good Index is crucial for having a good, accessible book. Having Bookmarks is crucial for having a good PDF. There are so many ways we have seen Bookmarks messed up it's not even funny. So let's start going over some things one by one.

So first, here is what you'd ideally see when you first open up the Bookmarks bar:

Clear, top-level categories, everything collapsed and visible on one page. You can instantly tell where to look. This would be an ideal version, but this example comes from Stars Without Number Revised, which has a few problems with its Bookmarks.

First of all, you shouldn't ever Bookmark trife. For example, the PDF has bookmarks to individual Backgrounds (which are irrelevant once you make your character) and individual Foci (which are only relevant during levelling up). Things that are so small you can fit 8 of them on a single page, yet you devote Bookmark real estate to each of them individually:

On top of that, that neat, top-level set of Bookmarks is all open when you load the PDF up, meaning this is what you see every time:

So if you want to use those Bookmarks, you have to devote a few extra clicks on closing the categories down one by one.

On a similar note, the same publisher has released Lexicon of the Throne which had some new problem with its Bookmarks:

Where some items in the Bookmarks turned into categories (Birds, Cities and Dance should be on the same level, but they aren't).

As nit-picky I might be about Sine Nomine while still enjoying it, at least the Bookmarks themselves are generally readable and usable. The same can't be said for Werewolf the Forsaken 2nd Edition:

First of all, the custom colour scheme looks awful in Acrobat Reader under dark mode. Something you'd expect a fair number of people to be using, but apparently nobody checked against. Similarly, the book itself uses flowery chapter names, which are pretty useless when it comes to quick navigation. Where would you look for character creation rules? "A Wolf I Am"? Wrong! That's where the lore is. "Laws of the Kill" is where you have those rules. Now you open up that tab and what do you see?

Sections like the Soul, Body and Spirit of the Wolf. What do those reference? Soul of the Wolf talks about the basic character concepts, creating your character and the pack. Body of the Wolf talks about various tricks you can do and transformations. Spirit of the Wolf describes various powers you have, Triggers is a half-page panel in the middle of the previous section, and Spirit Magic talks about even more powers you have but of a different variety. In general, a lot of flowery language that doesn't tell you much beyond a hint of what's present.

Vampire the Requiem 2nd Edition suffers from similar mistakes, except they also bookmarked the fiction that comes between all of the chapters:

Honestly, looking at the various PDFs we used in our games recently, I think Broken Worlds hits the mark again with a pretty decent set of Bookmarks that aren't immediately a mess when you open the PDF:

They tend to unfurl a bit on the lower levels, but it's still better than a lot of the other examples used (especially a few systems that didn't bother putting in any Bookmarks at all).

Quick reference rules

Explaining rules in detail is fine, but when you play the same game over and over, you only want to have some quick reference rules. So either offer some free / low cost GM screen with all of the core rules on it, or at the very least stick a few extra pages at the end of the book with only the core rules and dice modifiers. For example, Mage did it pretty well with their Spellcasting Quick Reference:

While we're at it...

While we're talking nitpicks, here are some other, small tips to keep in mind when creating the PDF / book as a whole:

Avoid homonyms. In The Veil you can pierce the veil to gain information from the Veil. First veil is the name of the game, second is a phrase for a Move, third is the in-universe name for the Internet. You wonder how many times "veil" is used in the book? A lot. Good luck finding the correct information if you want to know about anything besides talking about what you can do in The Veil the game.

Be unambiguous. Again in The Veil, you have a Playbook The Dying that is dying from a disease.

The Disease's symptoms progress and will eventually kill the Dying (Prognosis). The Dying Special allows you to spend hold to keep the symptoms at bay when the Disease triggers. Now, does that refer to the things under the Prognosis section, or the move Trigger? Initially when we played, we thought it was the former, but turns it was the latter. Generally, when you use some common words for names of powers or moves, you should make them distinct - make them bold, or use capital letters. "when your disease would trigger" is ambiguous, "when your Disease would Trigger" is less so. Fellowship is pretty good at this in comparison.

Offer low-weight PDFs. Sometimes all you care for in a PDF is being able to quickly flip through it on your phone. It would be useful to have some low-weight PDFs for that reason, and they could double as printer-friendly PDFs.

Conclusions

Offering a high-quality PDF experience can mean a lot of work, but in the end you will be saving your players a lot time and effort. So please, if you can, put the effort in to make the lives of us players that use PDFs a little less grating.

The mixed bag that is CoD Beast

I'm a long time World of Darkness fan. I used to mostly play Vampire the Masquarade and Vampire the Requiem, but recently my group decided to give most splats a try. We set out to see how they play in the system's newest iteration - the Chronicles of Darkness. One of the newer lines I was interested to try was Beast: The Primordial, a system where you play an embodiment of the primal nightmare that haunts all humanity. Reading through it however, the game seems a bit of a mixed bag - some parts of the setting look brilliant, while others may make you not want to pick it up at all.

So, without further ado, here are various interesting things I found about Beast, for good or ill. The post might feel a bit meandering, but it's meant to highlight what's noteworthy about the system, mechanics and the setting.

First off, everyone's favourite topic - lore!

Place in the cosmology

While Chronicles of Darkness were designed to be light on the metaplot and vague on the cosmology, one could argue there exists some connecting thread between some ideas presented in Beast and the lore from the first edition of Mage the Awakening.

In Mage, in the Arcanus Mundus chapter, it is basically established that the collective unconscious of proto-humanity, the Primordial Dream, shaped the world. These Dreams created the Atlantis, the place where first humans Awoke. They also created various supernatural creatures that are part of the reality of the world - vampires, werewolves, etc.

In similar vein, Beast talks about the Dark Mother, the first of the Beasts, that travelled into the Primordial Dream and became the first of all monsters.

Another aspect of Beast is their Inheritance and the Beast Incarnate. Basically, the end game of any Begotten (another term for Beast), is to become a perfect embodiment of the horror they represent so that they become that horror. They become something akin to the Boogeyman, or Jack the Ripper, or Bloody Mary - horror much bigger than themselves.

Based on that you could argue that all of the supernatural creatures are a reflection of a proto-being formed by some ancient Beast Incarnate. Some Begotten might've been a blood drinking creature of the night, thus creating the myth of a vampire in the fabric of the Primordial Dream, while a different Begotten might've been a man that takes the shape of a wolf and become Father Wolf. All of this fits so nicely - the Dark Mother creating the concept of Beasts, and then the Begotten filling the Primordial Dreams with subsequent kinds of horrors, all sharing a common kinship.

There is only one piece of the puzzle that to me is a bit misaligned. Beasts feel a kinship with all supernatural creatures except Demons. This probably hints that Demons came from somewhere else and are wholly alien to the world, which is an interesting notion. However, the Beasts also share a kinship with Mages - beings that are explicitly Awoken. They woke up from the Primordial Dream, so one would think they would hold Beasts in contempt as creatures of the Dream that they exert some dominion over. But apparently that's not the case...

A different part of the Beast lore are the Insatiables (detailed in Night Horrors Conquering Heroes), one of those "antagonist types" every CoD game seems to have, like the Strix to Vampires or the Pure Werewolves. The Insatiables represent different types of horrors - the Clashing Faults, the Freezing Hell, the Molten Earth, the Primordial Seas, and the Void. In my theory they represent horrors too grand for the human mind to comprehend completely. The concept of a vampire or a werewolf, however alien, is understandable - it's a horror that wants to murder you. The same can't be said for "the horror that is the unending winter of the ice age", or "the infinite cosmic horror of the emptiness of endless vacuum of space". The human mind can't think on such scales, and thus the Insatiables are like Beasts, but are still distinct from their brethren.

But enough about the philosophical waxing of the lore, let's talk about something much more immediate...

Lack of Integrity system

In Chronicles of Darkness, Integrity is a measurement of how human or alien you are. It can take many forms - mortals just have Integrity, a basic measurement of being a human in a civilised society - avoiding murder, torture, injury, or even contact with the supernatural. Vampires have Humanity - a measure of how connected they are to the mortal world by the means of maintaining contacts with actual people and not acting like a bloodsucker. Werewolves have a balancing act of Harmony - trying to remain true to both their human and wolf natures and keeping their life in balance. Mages have Wisdom, showing how single-minded they are in their pursuit of knowledge over being an actual person. You get the picture - each supernatural splat has a different flavour of balancing their supernatural nature with still being a person.

Unfortunately, Beast has none of that. There is no limit to what a Begotten can do without any consequences (save perhaps of creating a Hero if they "disrupt the Primordial Dream"). This is almost a step back in how Chronicles of Darkness have progressed from the old World of Darkness. See, back in the olden days, creatures like Vampires could arbitrarily choose their morality. Those came neatly packed into "Paths of Enlightenment". Did you want to diablerise your fellow vampires without remorse? Path of Blood! Run around in the woods like a wolf? Path of the Beast! Torture people for "science"? Path of Metamorphosis!

So in other words, whatever you decided to do, you would take "the path of doing whatever I wanted to do anyway" as your moral compass and you would be on your way, avoiding having to worry about descending into madness or trying to cling to the last few shreds of your humanity.

It is a bit of a missed opportunity that Beast lacks an Integrity system. It could've been interesting to see something perhaps akin to Werewolf's Harmony - trying to strike a balance between being a horror of the night and an actual person. Balancing being Rorschach and Walter Kovacs, or Batman and Bruce Wayne.

Because of their lack of Integrity to draw boundaries, as well as their kinship with the other supernaturals of the world, Beasts become...

Supernatural cheerleaders and a bad influence on their buddies

Beasts are naturally drawn to other supernaturals of the setting, and those supernaturals are in turn drawn to the Beasts. This is expressed through a number of mechanics. First is Kinship - any supernatural being (including vampires, werewolves, mages, slashers, and even mediums and psychics) starts off with positive first impressions of the Beast. Second is Family Ties - if a Beast and some other supernatural spend enough time together, they develop a deep connection, granting both sides of the party bonuses to support one another.

Skipping a few minor mechanics, we come to the last and perhaps the most powerful boon a Beast can draw from other supernaturals - Family Dinner. Thanks to this mechanic, if a Beast watches another supernatural hunt or feed, they themselves gain Satiety. The hunt must be genuine however, meaning a Vampire can't just drink from their blood doll to trigger Family Dinner - they must stalk and catch the prey.

Since gaining Satiety through Beast's normal Feeding is much more cumbersome and unpredictable than going with your Vampire buddy to watch him drink blood, the Beasts might be naturally inclined to use it as a natural means of gaining sustenance. Add to this the want to expand their Lairs with some quality Chambers and the lack of an Integrity system, may lead them to being a bad influence on their buddies.

It would be really easy for a Beast to goat a Vampire into feeding more than they need, or getting them to lose that one dot of Integrity somewhere "because I really want this place as a new Chamber". It's so easy for a Beast to tell the Vampire that they will take care of that body for them, it's not a big deal really. The Beast doesn't care - it doesn't have Integrity to lose. All it cares about is getting its next fix, so it becomes a supernatural cheerleader for their kin. Hanging around a Beast is like having a friend that wants to do crack with you on a daily basis, except somehow they only get the high and none of the side effects, while your skin itches and your teeth are falling out...

Since we're on the subject of feeding...

Live to eat, don't eat to live

One categorical lie the Beast book states explicitly is "Eat to Live, Don’t Live to Eat", which really goes against what the mechanics and tones of Beast is really all about. The Begotten are supposed to "teach people lessons" and further their Legend, but at the same time - that's how the Beasts also feed. So if say, you were playing Batman, you would strike fear into the hearts of criminals, beat them up for being bad and teach them that crime is illegal. This is the lesson you impart, and by teaching that lesson, you also become more ingrained into the Primordial Dream as "the dark knight". More likely then not, this also feeds into your hunger as a Nemesis - you feed by punishing people for their crimes.

Unfortunately, teaching lessons, furthering your legend and feeding are pretty much the only core things a Beast does (other than expanding their lair and fighting heroes). Now compare this to Vampires, creatures that probably share the closest thematic connection to the Begotten.

Vampires need to feed, sure. Having to hurt people on daily basis is taxing, but you can manage that over time with Herd or Feeding Ground. You also have obligations to your sire, your Clan and your Covenant. Maybe you are obliged to spy on someone for your Mekhet brothers, or are expected to take care of your fledgling Carthian brothers, all the while your sire is telling you to represent him well during Elysium meetings because any faux pas will reflect badly on them. At the same time you also need to maintain a facade of being human, otherwise your Humanity will suffer, and you want to maintain your Touchstones that keep you grounded. Vampires are very social creatures by necessity, and that plays to their themes.

Beast has none of that. There are no Begotten societies save perhaps of the local brood. You're not responsible for say, feeding some new Beast that is still learning the ropes. You don't have to maintain human contacts.

Worse yet, due to the mechanics of feeding, you often want to plan your meals ahead of time. The more sated you are, the more elaborate a lesson you need to give. A hungry Batman will be fine just beating a few thugs up, but one that has been somewhat sated would need to confront a supervillain and punish them in a very unique way, perhaps even killing them in the process. So while you have just sated your hunger for the night or week, you also want to start preparing for the next meal - start looking for the next prey and put the plan into motion.

Now let's move to another resource the Beasts accrue...

Lairs, the hidden landscape of the city, and the Apex

Each Beast has a Lair, a network of Chambers weaved together into a land of their own. Those Chambers are a reflections of the real world. They are impressions made on the Primordial Dream by some trauma - either a loss of Integrity, or a powerful Nightmare caused by the Beast. As the book Building a Legend suggests, this basically means the supernatural activity of the city will leave long lasting markings on the Primordial Dream in form of those Chambers.

Lack of unclaimed Chambers would usually mean there are a lot of Beasts in the area looking for them. Clusters of them mean there is some sort of predator frequenting the area and causing harm. Some old chambers might be clues to something that happened years back. This paints a new, hidden landscape to the city the Beasts get to explore.

This gives the Begotten a lot of opportunity to investigate what happened at a given place so they might add that Chamber to their Lair. Tracking the supernatural culprit and figuring out what transpired can be interesting story seeds playing on similar themes to Mage or Hunter. This can be really interesting! Alternatively of course, the Beasts can just cause some trauma themselves to create new Chambers and skip that fun...

Another part of the Beast lore tied to the above is the Apex - the top supernatural dog of the city. The Apex is the supernatural creature that has the most impact on the Primordial Dream of the area. Not necessarily the oldest or the strongest, but the one that is the most present in people's minds. The Batman of Gotham, Jack the Ripper of London, the Boruta of Łęczyca. Figuring out who the local Apex is can be an interesting investigative story in itself, and a Beast trying to become the Apex themselves is an aspiration for a good campaign.

To attain such prestige, a Beast will need its repertoire of powers...

Atavisms, Nightmares and Advanced Merits - three flavours of power

Initially reading over the various Beast powers, I misunderstood what was being presented, and I'm wondering if more people could make a similar error and not see the interesting potential of the mechanics.

Reading things initially, Atavisms were the obvious "Disciplines" of the Begotten - the main cool powers that make Beasts Beasts. These powers didn't have any obvious "levels" to them, you could basically choose any of them at any point, but that was fine - each power had three distinct things you could do with it either by default, when you have low Satiety, or when you spend Satiety. This was cool and thematic - the Beasts would get tougher when pushed to their limits, and each Satiety expenditure were meaningful in comparison to spending a single point of Vitae, Mana, Essense or the like, since Beasts can only ever have 10 points of Satiety at any given time.

However, looking at the Atavisms, I was missing a few key types of powers one would come to expect from the supernatural splats. A lot of the powers were combat oriented, or were otherwise physical (dragon breath, flying, hiding, etc.). Beasts seemed to be lacking mind-reading or mind-control, and their ability to influence people's emotions were usually limited to conversations with Alien Allure and Siren's Treacherous Song, making them more of a temptress or seductress, rather than king among men.

Advanced Merits were interesting boons for the character - not as powerful as Atavisms, but still interesting enough in their own right as to be cool.

The Nightmares initially appeared as "those powers to scare people". With powers such as "All Your Teeth Are Falling Out", "You Are Alone", "You Are Not Alone", it was easy to dismiss this category of powers as some flavouring to add to the Beast character, rather than anything worthwhile in its own right. Here is where I was really wrong.

As it turns out, Nightmares are the more subtle powers for the Begotten. They are at their most effective when the beast has high Satiety. Those basically reflect a cat playing with its food, rather than a cat on a hunt. Those are the powers that were missing from the Atavisms. "You Must Obey" is basically Vampiric Dominate. "We Know All Your Secrets" is a way to have the victim lead the character to their darkest secrets. "Fear is Contagious" is a way to affect a larger group of people. Between this and being able to create one's own Nightmares, this covers a lot of ground the Atavisms were missing.

The last overlooked power of the Beast are the Primordial Pathways. These allow Beasts to move between their Lair and anywhere else in the World of Darkness universe like a horror movie villain. They can reach Temenos, Anima Mundi, Oneiros, Shadow, Hedge, Underworld, or the real world. This is an incredibly open-ended and flexible power, but unfortunately it seems to be left underutilised. There aren't that many mechanics to how a Beast can benefit from going to the Underworld, nor are there that many story prompts as to what the Beast should do with this power (say, become a therapist that goes into peoples' mind and hunt the embodiment of their fear and trauma to help their patients recover). It's pretty much left as a way for Beast to go anywhere, do anything, and bring their buddies along...

Conclusions

Beast is an interesting but flawed game. It set out to create a class of characters that were supposed to represent something akin to a universal monster, hunted by evil heroes, monsters being the good guys and hanging out with other monsters like some interesting team mashup. It turns out that the monster is more of a Rorschach (a crazy, obsessed person you definitely don't want to be around), the heroes had to be one dimensional not to be likeable, and the team doesn't have a strong theme or mechanic to connect them.

Vampire the Requiem tells a better story where the monster has to hurt other people to survive, but also wants to remain themselves. Werewolf the Forsaken tells a better story of being a part of a misfit family (especially if you look at the Pack book).

With that being said, I still feel there might be some enjoyment to be had playing as a Beast character. As long as you embrace what the game is, have a strong idea of the character, and the GM is on board with it (especially if your build would upset the power scale at the table - Beasts can be rough!), it can be compelling to play a character like that. As you might've guessed by now, it seems that Beast is less geared towards playing The Beast from Beauty and the Beast, and seems to be better suited to letting you play Batman or Rorschach. And if you should always be Batman given the opportunity, why not take it now? ;)